Between the late night video calls
And the half hearted, “Goodnight”,
Coated with a sigh of longing to
Eagerly see the morning sun and a,
“Good morning” text from him,
Lie a billion hidden messages of
Walking by the seaside, and
Creating new footprints in the sand,
Together, and feel the waves touching
Your bare feet with a shiver
You also get when
You open the door and see a
Dozen boxes of your favourite chocolates
And a little note scribbled in that
Messy handwriting of his, which is
Still as clear to you as the day when
He suddenly dropped by one evening
And walked by your side to the same
Shore, making sand castles with you,
And hoping the waves would wash
Them away just so he would get
More time to make you shiver with him.
Nice..
Thank you!
Look at you all romantic. Aww. You’re “TheOpenWindow” and you mentioned an open door.
-guides you to the other side-
You throwing me out of the window or out the door?
My heart.
#Score
You can’t. Lol.
Unfortunately.
Please you love me the most.
Not as much as I love my iPod. But ily.
Ily2
Wonderful poetry! Welcome back.
Thank you so much! Feels good to write again.
That’s just all nice and gooey
Refreshing indeed and well written
Thank you! 🙂
Lovely! The longing and sweetness shine through.
Thank you so much c:
Dear shreya,
It is really awesome .great work…
Aww, thank you so much! 🙂
Finally! And I am jealous now. Lovely, cute, adorable, and lovely!
Haha, aww man. Why are you jealous, though?
Is this a work of fiction? I hope not. 😛
I wish it wasn’t just fiction :3
And look at it. You’ve written it so wonderfully that it doesn’t look fictitious. I seriously related it with your tour to Goa. xD
If only, man, if only.
Had I been 3 years older and lived anywhere near Delhi, I’d have asked you for a date right at this moment. xD Good night!
Aren’t you a sweetheart. :3
Is that an indirect way of calling me a junior? :c
Beautiful. I like the love story within your poem.
Thank you!
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A humble reflection on a pair of sand-crossed lovers…
Nice!
Thank you!
You are welcome!
Beautifully expressed. Thanks for stopping by my blog and bringing me to yours.:-)
Haha, thank you so much. 🙂